22 thoughts on “Disciple

  1. I always belive in constructive criticism. I really think that your poem goes well with the picture. However the third verse “To touch of your healing, such glories unheard” is very confusing both in meter, grammar. I do understand the emotions but i have confidence that you can perfectly write with all these technical points in mind.

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